X Users Didn’t Like a Paper’s Tone and Findings, So They Got It Rejected

By Ross Pomeroy

February 28, 2024

At Frontiers in Psychology, it seems that users on X are now part of the peer review process.

On January 4th, the paper “Meta-analysis: On average, undergraduate students’ intelligence is merely average,” was accepted to the journal. That same day, the abstract was published with the notice that the “final, formatted version of the article will be published soon.”

Soon thereafter, the paper went viral, quickly accruing over 54,000 views, wide discussion on X and Reddit, and coverage in popular media (including RCS). It garnered this attention for its intriguing yet simultaneously obvious finding: over the past 80 years, as a far greater proportion of North Americans attended college, the average IQ of college undergraduates dropped from around 120 to 102, just slightly above the average of 100.

As the authors, Bob Uttl, a psychologist and faculty member at Mount Royal University, and his students Victoria Violo and Lacey Gibson, noted, “The decline in students’ IQ is a necessary consequence of increasing educational attainment over the last 80 years. Today, graduating from university is more common than completing high school in the 1940s.” College students no longer come solely from the ranks of the highly intelligent and privileged, they come from all corners of society. Uttl and his colleagues noted that this has implications. For example, academic standards and curricula might have to be adjusted. Moreover, employers can’t assume that applicants with university degrees are more capable or smarter than those without degrees.

A little over a month after Uttl, Violo, and Gibson’s paper was accepted and the abstract published, they were abruptly notified by email that it was rejected. They were apprised that Specialty Chief Editor Eddy Davelaar, a Professor of Psychology and Applied Neuroscience at Birkbeck, University of London, overrode the three peer reviewers who approved the paper and even his own handling editor. His reasons were subsequently forwarded to Uttl and his colleagues.

While Davelaar raised a couple of issues with the paper’s methods, the vast majority of his focus was on its tone. He wrote that the use of the word “merely” in reference to college students’ just-above-average IQ was “demeaning.” He also noted that the authors’ critiques of other scientists’ works “could have been packaged more sensitively.” He also called unfounded the authors’ opinion that the widening participation policies of universities were the cause of undergraduates’ falling IQs.

In emails viewed by RealClearScience, Uttl extensively refuted Davelaar’s issues the same day the paper was rejected (Feb. 6), to which he received no reply from Davelaar or Frontiers for six days. On February 12, Frontiers replied saying that Davelaar’s concerns remained. If they were addressed, “the manuscript could be reconsidered for publication.”

Uttl subsequently published his refutations of Davelaar’s methodological criticisms online. Lending strength to his arguments is that fact that three peer reviewers and even Davelaar’s own handling editor did not find fault with Uttl’s paper.

Davelaar’s problems with the paper’s tone and conclusions were harder to address, because they were his opinions. It seemed strange that an editor’s opinions should supplant those of the paper’s authors. It’s not his paper, after all.

In response to a request for comment, Frontiers stated that an article can be rejected at any stage before official publication. A public relations manager then quoted their editorial process, “…if a manuscript does not meet our editorial criteria and standards for publication, or if peer-review or research integrity concerns are raised by any review participant or reader (abstracts are published online ahead of official publication), the journal’s chief editors and Frontiers’ Chief Executive Editor will investigate these concerns, regardless of peer review or acceptance stage.”

Frontiers added:

The Speciality Chief Editor (SCE) reviewed the paper in line with our clearly stated editorial process when concerns were raised about the abstract, particularly about underlying bias. The SCE assessment concurred with some reviewers’ judgements, identifying substantive flaws in the meta-analysis and bias in the tone of the paper. The authors were given further opportunities to revise the paper in line with reviewer and SCE comments. These requested revisions were not made but once again disputed. 

RealClearScience reached out directly to Davelaar for comment, but he has not replied.

Uttl was curious what brought on the sudden rejection of his already accepted paper, so he asked representatives at Frontiers. He was told that “several posts” on X triggered Dr. Davelaar’s review. As readers were only able to view the abstract, and thus weren’t able to assess the authors’ methodology, it seems clear that they complained purely about the authors’ tone and provocative conclusions. Davelaar only found ‘problems’ with Uttl, Violo, and Gibson’s methods afterwards.

Uttl and his co-authors were not apprised of the content of the X posts.

“I think an editor or whoever owes it to us to tell us what the issues are, allows us to respond, before rejection,” he told RCS in an email.

Uttl, Violo, and Gibson have since had their publication fees refunded and have submitted the paper for publication at another journal.

This article was originally published by RealClearScience and made available via RealClearWire.

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Tony Tea
March 3, 2024 10:26 pm

The key cause of the decrease in IQ is people like Eddy Davelaar.

MarkW
Reply to  Tony Tea
March 4, 2024 11:18 am

I’m going to guess that Davelaar is an equity hire.

Rick C
Reply to  Tony Tea
March 4, 2024 3:03 pm

No, it’s clearly caused by climate change. Everything is caused by climate change now. The authors just need to include a reference to CAGW and their paper will be published in a nanosecond.

Reply to  Rick C
March 4, 2024 7:29 pm

Truth
Actually truth x 1000
climate change ALARMISM definitely makes people dumb, robs them of their ability to form rational, logical arguments.

leefor
March 3, 2024 11:09 pm

It didn’t pass the DEI test. Finding fault in the IQ’s didn’t pass the Inclusivity test. How dare they? 😉

Bil
Reply to  leefor
March 4, 2024 12:06 am

Well, as Russell Group Unis in the UK believe that appointing the best person for a job is a microagression, we see how he got his tenure.

another ian
Reply to  leefor
March 4, 2024 2:02 pm

This might go with that –

FWIW on investing –

“My oldest, best friend runs a large, contrarian investment fund. One of his favorite techniques to identify his short-sale targets (i.e., betting the stock price will fall) is counting up the minutes of investor calls devoted to DEI. He swears there is an inverse relationship between the proportion of DEI chatter and future stock performance.

In other words, the more corporate officials talk about their awesome DEI programs, the more it seems like they’re trying to distract investors from problems with their fundamentals. I would add that the more time and attention top management devotes to DEI, the less time and attention it has to give its real mission, which should be delivering a superior product or service.

Let’s test the theory. Victoria’s Secret, Moderna, and ConocoPhillips all significantly expanded their DEI teams last year. But even though the market as a whole is up, the jab company and the now body-positive lingerie firm are down year-over-year. Only the oil and gas company is up, and only about +1%. So.”

https://open.substack.com/pub/coffeeandcovid/p/the-abolition-of-woke-monday-march?r=1vxw0k&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=email

observa
March 4, 2024 12:28 am

He also called unfounded the authors’ opinion that the widening participation policies of universities were the cause of undergraduates’ falling IQs.

Oh so it’s the school system that’s producing all the dumb and dumber entrants or their tertiary educated teachers and their methods. Right got it perfessor.

Rod Evans
March 4, 2024 12:49 am

It makes you wonder if the rejecting Professor Davelaar has ever heard of the bell curve of natural/normal distribution? It would be interesting to know where Prof Davelaar sits on the IQ scale….

strativarius
Reply to  Rod Evans
March 4, 2024 1:08 am

…just behind a glass of water

Reply to  strativarius
March 4, 2024 6:51 am

I’ve known a PhD or two who were truly stupid people.

Reply to  karlomonte
March 4, 2024 7:36 am

Universities were originally (and for some time) a place to educate and challenge those with the ability in complex and esoteric fields. For some years now they have merely been teaching how to pass an exam. When your funding depends on getting as many students to graduate as possible then you’ll graduate more and more students, no matter what their abilities actually are.

jvcstone
Reply to  Richard Page
March 4, 2024 8:51 am

Yes, and McDonald’s and Burger King do appreciate the higher academic standing of their minimum wage flippers

MarkW
Reply to  jvcstone
March 4, 2024 11:21 am

In CA there is a bill to increase the minimum wage at fast food and sit down restaurants to $20/hr.

There is one exemption, for companies that make and sell their own bread.

Did I mention that Panera is a major financial backer of the governor?

jvcstone
Reply to  MarkW
March 4, 2024 11:44 am

I saw that in the news. Aside from the obvious favoritism, I wonder how much a big mac will cost if it becomes law.

Reply to  jvcstone
March 4, 2024 12:30 pm

How many burgers can a burger-flipper flip? Per hour!

Reply to  Richard Page
March 4, 2024 4:43 pm

G’Day Richard,

How many burgers can a burger-flipper flip?”

If you can find a copy, your question is answered in:

A Stainless Steel Rat is Born, by Harry Harrison, published in 1985.

Reply to  Tombstone Gabby
March 4, 2024 6:08 pm

I used to have the entire series many, many years ago. I don’t remember it from the book but maybe it was sat in the back of my mind somewhere.

Reply to  Richard Page
March 5, 2024 7:13 am

G’Day Richard,

“…many, many years ago.”

Know the feeling. As in: “It’s heck to get old, but it beats the alternative.”



Reply to  strativarius
March 4, 2024 10:34 am

Just behind an amoeba.

JamesB_684
Reply to  Rod Evans
March 4, 2024 7:02 am

Some ideas are so stupid only an “Intellectual” could believe them.

strativarius
March 4, 2024 12:50 am

Story tip – The John Money awards

“”Nearly a third of British scientists now believe biological sex is ‘non-binary’
“To me this just means that at least 29 per cent of the academics that filled out this questionnaire do not understand the biological concept of sex, and at least 22 per cent of them do not know what gender means””
https://www.gbnews.com/news/non-binary-transgender-britain-scientists-censuswide-survey

PhDs aren’t worth the paper they’re written on

observa
Reply to  strativarius
March 4, 2024 1:38 am

Well they would contextualise that now wouldn’t they-
Why is there a college gender gap between men and women? | World Economic Forum (weforum.org)
Have we got any binary breakdown of IQ with STEM subjects vs Womens Studies Arts and Humanities?

strativarius
Reply to  observa
March 4, 2024 4:53 am

Would you dare to trust their data?

MarkW
Reply to  strativarius
March 4, 2024 11:23 am

Either that, or they have been made aware that putting down the wrong answer could have detrimental effects on their future employment.

sherro01
Reply to  strativarius
March 4, 2024 2:51 pm

strat,
Many years back here in Australia, it was 17th March and St Patrick’s Day. The radio talk-back shows were doing their usual thing, running Irish jokes. A sweet, female, Irish voice joined in.
Jock: Hi lady, sounds like you are Irish?
Lady: Yes I am. So, you are having stories about the Irish?
Jock: Yes, we are having stories.
Lady: Can I please tell a story?
Jock: Sure, lady, go ahead.
Lady “Tell me, how do you make an Irish lass pregnant?
Jock: I don’t know, tell me how you make an Irish lass pregnant.
Lady “Ah, and you think we Irish are stupid.”
(Game, set, match).
Geoff S

March 4, 2024 1:21 am

It’s a Psycho-ology paper anyway.

Pity MAD magazine isn’t still running !!..

Or has it just changed names.

Reply to  bnice2000
March 4, 2024 6:52 am

What, me worry?

Richard Greene
March 4, 2024 2:11 am

It makes sense that if a larger percentage of the population attends college, the average IQ of college students would decline.

I am trying to figure out how the authors would obtain what are supposed to be confidential test scores only reported to parents.

Until I can get an explanation of how the data were collected, I consider this study to be claptrap and I reject this article from my blog’s daily recommended reading list.

The Honest Climate Science and Energy Blog

strativarius
Reply to  Richard Greene
March 4, 2024 2:37 am

“” if a larger percentage of the population attends college, the average IQ of college students would decline.””

When I attended primary school back in the mists of time, we had the dreaded 11+ exam. Pupils were streamed into secondary education by their results. The bright kids went to grammar schools or other private educational establishments. Everybody else went to a Secondary Modern or Comprehensive school.

Out of a class of thirty, two or three would make it to the upper stream. But then, we had a free thinking education as opposed to the more modern indoctrination…. And my contemporaries still got decent jobs – because they knew how to do things.

Reply to  strativarius
March 4, 2024 7:46 am

I went to a grammar school. We got taught how to think not what to think but the rot was creeping in even then – one teacher did a series of presentations on the dangers of uncontrolled global cooling and how we must cut down our emissions before we entered an ice age of our own making. Backed up by newspaper articles, scientific studies, papers and scholarly articles from a wide variety of sources – almost every journal or science magazine in the school library ran articles referencing the coming ice age – the Hoyles even wrote a book about it.

This, too, shall pass.

Mr.
Reply to  Richard Page
March 4, 2024 8:48 am

The rot had already infected my mature-age student economics degree course in 1975.
The professor managed to work a message about the evils of capitalism into every lecture and tutorial.

sherro01
Reply to  strativarius
March 4, 2024 2:55 pm

Strat,
You must be young if you were in a class of THIRTY.
Geoff S
http://www.geoffstuff.com/school.jpg

observa
Reply to  Richard Greene
March 4, 2024 4:26 am

It makes sense that if a larger percentage of the population attends college, the average IQ of college students would decline.

Not where tree rings plus thermometers equals dooming and solar panels plus windmills equals ideal global average temperature. Back to most participated math class for you boyoh.

Robert
Reply to  Richard Greene
March 4, 2024 7:38 am

The study may not be claptrap, but no, one cannot evaluate the methodology without being able to peruse it. The peer reviewers had no problem with it, but then, we know that’s hardly foolproof. Apparently it has been submitted elsewhere, so we may yet have the chance to see the details.

Mr.
Reply to  Richard Greene
March 4, 2024 8:43 am

Aw thanks for this Richard.
My finger was poised to click on your blog to apprise myself of the “best” analysis of this situation, and all else that threatens world order.
My first bullet dodged for the day.

Fran
Reply to  Richard Greene
March 4, 2024 10:02 am

Do you not know that standardized tests like the SAT are actually IQ tests, and that anonymized data is regularly analysed?

Richard Greene
Reply to  Fran
March 4, 2024 4:51 pm

SAT is not an IQ test. It’s far from it. Developed reasoning skills measured on a test like the SAT, will link directly to the, the breadth and the depth of the curriculum students have been exposed to in school, but also out of school learning.

MarkW
Reply to  Richard Greene
March 4, 2024 11:24 am

Getting hold of de-identified data is very easy to do for researchers.

Richard Greene
Reply to  MarkW
March 4, 2024 5:01 pm

Students rarely get IQ tests now
The trend began over 50 years ago

If elementary through high school students did get their IQ tested and their name was replaced with an anonymous number, how would anyone find out whether or not they went to college after high school? And whether they completed a degree or dropped out?

Richard Greene
Reply to  MarkW
March 4, 2024 5:01 pm

Students rarely get IQ tests now
The trend began over 50 years ago

If elementary through high school students did get their IQ tested and their name was replaced with an anonymous number, how would anyone find out whether or not they went to college after high school? And whether they completed a degree or dropped out?

Richard Greene
Reply to  Richard Greene
March 4, 2024 5:13 pm

I was hoping someone would say this but I guess that will be me. I get downvotes whatever I say and could not care less

Affirmative action has placed people in four years colleges who previously might have qualified only for community colleges or perhaps no colleges at all.

When less intelligent people are allowed tin four year colleges, they more often drop out than the more intelligent students.

The sad result could be a black student dropping out of a four year college and never getting a degree. But the same person might have been able to get a two year degree at a community college. Or learn a blue collar trade and make big money.

My research shows public school students rarely receive IQ tests and it is illegal for employers to use IQ tests

SAT and ACT tests are not IQ tests

I still question the ability of the study authors to accurately calculate the average IQ of college students

Ed Zuiderwijk
March 4, 2024 2:57 am

If the average has dropped to about the average in the population at large it means that about 50% of each years cohort is of below average intelligence. That includes one may assume those who want to become doctors and surgeons or structural engineers. Good luck with that folks.

Rod Evans
Reply to  Ed Zuiderwijk
March 4, 2024 3:46 am

It would be a troubling bit of data if we didn’t know that (hopefully) the majority of those under the 100 average are ‘studying’ arts based subjects like PPEs in the case of potential MPs or maybe art and dance preferences of the Minoan Proletariat, a degree that can teach you all you need to know about nothing….suitable for those aspiring to become JSO or XR graduates.

Reply to  Rod Evans
March 4, 2024 7:47 am

Indeed or arts based subjects like Climate Science.

Mac
March 4, 2024 3:53 am

I arrived at UCLA in 1973 to teach pathology. That was during the affirmative action era which has morphed into DEI. There were student who should never been admitted. Back then women were included in affirmative action as well. So I can definitely understand the papers points and consider them valid.

strativarius
Reply to  Mac
March 4, 2024 4:57 am

I think validity has something to do with it. When you’re getting flak you’re over the target.

Reply to  strativarius
March 4, 2024 7:49 am

Yup, pain in the bum when it happens though.

Fran
Reply to  Mac
March 4, 2024 9:57 am

I quit in 2012. Marking exams was painful. One would think, “Did I ever say that”. Then I’d get one from the minority and heave a sigh of relief. To keep the dumber ones out, I went for early morning classes but this meant that the dept did not like the smaller class that resulted. And at the end of it all the student evaluations were bimodal, reflecting the performance of students. It was well known that there were professors who graded “liberally” as a means of getting better annual salary increases – so called “Merit” awards.

John the Econ
March 4, 2024 5:47 am

How long can an advanced technological society last when what is or is not considered “Science!” is based upon some individuals sense of “sensitivity”?

JamesB_684
Reply to  John the Econ
March 4, 2024 7:05 am

That experiment is being run right now. We’re living through it.

Reply to  John the Econ
March 4, 2024 7:50 am

Think ‘Venezuela’ writ large.

The Expulsive
March 4, 2024 6:38 am

Frankly, the findings in that paper are in line with what my third year professor (stats, economics, ergonomics) had said way back in 1976, that is: You will find, as the government expands post secondary education to allow more and more people to attend university, that, in order to maintain the higher numbers, the standards for attendance will have to be expanded as well.
I am not at all surprised by the findings, or the objections raised. Logically, if you expand the pool, then the pool will contain those who would not have previously attained acceptance. But then, who wants to believe that they are just average?
We all see this in university admissions and the ratcheting up of what credentials are now needed to qualify for an entry level admission. I was told when I sought attendance to law school 15 years after graduating engineering school (conspiratorially by the Assistant Dean, who was interviewing me) that my mid 70s mark for a 1977 BaSc was equal to a mid 80s mark for a current BSc (from his university, wink, wink, nudge, nudge)

MarkW
Reply to  The Expulsive
March 4, 2024 11:33 am

A couple of years ago, I interviewed with a company from Chicago. During the interview, they informed me that they were only looking for candidates who scored above 3.0 in GPA. It didn’t matter what school, it didn’t matter when you graduated. That was their standard.

It could be a school that flunked out 2/3rds of incoming freshmen, or it could be one that graduated over 90%. It didn’t matter to them.

They were also looking at your over all GPA, not your in-degree GPA.

Tom_Morrow
March 4, 2024 6:48 am

Perhaps the problem is that colleges and universities, in their quest for more money, have increasingly expanded their ranks of matriculants with underqualified students.

Remedial classes for basic subjects that should have mastered in high school is a huge red flag that academic excellence is no longer a main purpose of a college. And these classes existed even back when I was an undergraduate, some 40 years ago.

The turning away from standardized tests and the continuous lowering of academic standards are also signposts that universities have been turned into high school extension classes.

March 4, 2024 6:50 am

This is beyond pathetic.

March 4, 2024 7:11 am

We have moved from peer review to mob review. Seems about right for the climatistas.

Reply to  Shoki
March 4, 2024 7:57 am

Review by experts in their fields were rejecting too many of their fellow travellers and letting too many deplorables through. This way they give their mates a free pass which is never a good sign – that’s how you kill off scientific enquiry, development and the advancement of knowledge.

MarkW
Reply to  Richard Page
March 4, 2024 11:38 am

The science is already settled. We don’t need no “advancement of knowledge”.

Reply to  MarkW
March 4, 2024 12:35 pm

Trust me, I’d noticed that already!

March 4, 2024 8:44 am

If we’ve gotten to a point where objective research that produces results people don’t like is rejected, in favor of “warm fuzzy feelings”, science is dead.

A recent study done on police treatment of minorities produced an unpopular result. The professor heading up the study had two different groups analyze the data and they both came up with the same conclusion. He caught a lot of backlash including death threats.

I think we’re at (or beyond) that point.

mleskovarsocalrrcom
March 4, 2024 9:59 am

Whether accurate or not this ‘finding’ is easy to believe. “Back in the day” I paid no attention to what university, if any, interviewees attended. Real world experience won every time. Those that went to Ivy league schools and played on their alma mater did so to their detriment. And it doesn’t stop with college. Our education system has deteriorated to crap. Just like everyone gets a trophy, everyone graduates.

michael hart
March 4, 2024 12:45 pm

I advise any serious author with a manuscript to publish that they run a mile from a journal with someone holding the job title “Speciality Chief Editor”.

(This would also apply to “Specialty Chief Editor”.)

Old.George
March 4, 2024 4:03 pm

At one time 8th-grade graduates had a useful education. They could read, write, understood civics, and could balance a checkbook. Average. A high-school education was for the above average.
Then it was decided that everyone should get a high-school education. And so getting a high-school degree became average. A university education was for the above average.
Then it was decided that everyone should get a loan for a university education. The place to go for the average student. A doctorate was for the above average.

A simple tale. Watch for the next step.

March 4, 2024 7:28 pm

Poor little woke snowflakes, can’t bear being called average.
its 2024, did any of the X-babies invoke “genocide”, that is after all the gold standard of rational debate today.

March 5, 2024 11:28 pm

over the past 80 years, as a far greater proportion of North Americans attended college, the average IQ of college undergraduates dropped from around 120 to 102

I’m quite sure the same can be said for “published works” in general. At least published in the sense people read it and believe it to be true.

Or put another way, access to the internet gives to people the ability to get their views out in public and the average IQ behind those views is now probably around 100.

Sparta Nova 4
March 6, 2024 1:18 pm

Back in the old days (1960s & 1970s) it was well understood that the impetus to expanding college enrollments was merely a process to delay large numbers from entering the work force.

Seems the same, nay worse, today.

March 9, 2024 5:07 am

It’s the ‘Participation Awards’ generation.
Most of whom have always been told that they were unique and exceptional individuals, even as they received a passing grade on an exam they left mostly blank.

Grading on a curve, participation awards and no child left behind is now about to gut brutally honest science.